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Exactly mate that's the idea! Perfect job for anyone with half an interest in sport.

Thank you very much for the detailed feedback. I will definitely take it all on board. As you can probably tell I am currently in my infancy with regards to sports writing but practice makes perfect as they say!

Hello all, As an aspiring sports writer I have recently produced an article for an online sports website about the success Demba Ba has had during his time at Newcastle. In order to get it out there to as many people as possible I am calling on you, the fans, to spare just a few minutes of your time to take a look. Any feedback would be very much appreciated and taken on board. I apologise if this is posted in the wrong place but I simply wanted to bring the article to the interest of as many Newcastle United fans as possible. Please follow this link to take a look: http://www.sportinbr...n-of-the-season