Christmas Tree 4669 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Thought CT would be all over this thread like a rash. As soon as I saw this.... "Changed title to The Enclave Saga : Towards Enlightenment." or Teste for short.... I thought "no, stay out". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jonasjuice 0 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Put a space dog in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Carr's Gloves 3788 Posted January 1, 2014 Author Share Posted January 1, 2014 Put a space dog in it Gonna put a Rottweiler in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkeys Fist 41888 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Put a space dog in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ewerk 30159 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 More car chases. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meenzer 15342 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Put a Shrek in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Howmanheyman 32595 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Might need a steamy love scene with a buxom nurse to spice it up a bit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Carr's Gloves 3788 Posted January 1, 2014 Author Share Posted January 1, 2014 Might need a steamy love scene with a buxom nurse to spice it up a bit? Kids book. So no anal allowed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rob W 0 Posted January 3, 2014 Share Posted January 3, 2014 title should start with A or B - alphabetical order still counts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meenzer 15342 Posted January 3, 2014 Share Posted January 3, 2014 title should start with A or B - alphabetical order still counts His authorial pseudonym is Kevin Carr's Aardvark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Carr's Gloves 3788 Posted January 3, 2014 Author Share Posted January 3, 2014 His authorial pseudonym is Kevin Carr's Aardvark Aaron .A. Aaronson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Park Life 71 Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 You want to start with a cogent and well written 100-120 page book first. Ideas that don't work won't be any better at 350 length. The quest has to seem impossible and the quester totally ill suited to the journey..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rob W 0 Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 oh that's easy now... "newcastle united's Quest for a trophy under Mike......" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Carr's Gloves 3788 Posted January 29, 2014 Author Share Posted January 29, 2014 Ok don't agree with Parky's bit so ignoring it. Have changed the title to "The Enclave Saga: Book One. Hunted". This actually came from something CT said so fairplay. Can be read here https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10027307/1/The-Enclave-Saga-Hunted Or here. http://www.wattpad.com/story/11801330-the-enclave-saga-book-one-hunted really not happy with my explanation of how civilisation as we know it ended. Any help there would be well received. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trophyshy 7066 Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 The first line of your prologue is "'Weird name' stood and'" The first line of your first chapter is "'Weird name' stood and" Maybe mix things up a bit? Have one of them sitting down or something? Stuff like that sticks out to me, variety being the spice of life and all. Or is this Freudian and you're a filthy stander yourself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Happy Face 29 Posted January 30, 2014 Share Posted January 30, 2014 Please don't take it the wrong way. I don't consider myself a thinker, I've not read any of your actual story or many of the posts in the thread. I'm no critic, especially of literature, when I read it tends to be 90% non-fiction because i lack any imagination of my own and prefer pictures to be painted for me. ...but, I thought it was a pretty inspirational video, whatever the quality of your writing or how far you are into the frustrating process of creating...or any endeavour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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