Guest JakPwhatculture Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 @ Hahaha classic. Not remember when he shifted Shola back into centre midfield away at Norwich (when we lost 4-2 I think) and he knocked a killer ball through for Ba to score? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Howmanheyman 26814 Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Saying shit performances were 'unlike us' when in fact they were very much like us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gemmill 34441 Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Not accepting the England job when CT offered it. Acquiescing to the owner on getting knocked out of the cups ASAP. I know he's the owner, but you're a football manager and it shouldn't be in your dna to throw games - he should have stood up for himself and made a compelling case for trying to win a cup, instead of bending over and splaying his cheeks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Howmanheyman 26814 Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 The same desperately piss poor crosses in to Mike 'Timid' Williamson. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayatollah Hermione 12767 Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 The fact he has blamed the wind on us losing games at least twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLACKANDWHITEGEORDIE 0 Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Why stop at 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Howmanheyman 26814 Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
essembeeofsunderland 811 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Signing M'Biwa Playing M'Biwa Accepting he is a yesman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meenzer 14042 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Signing M'Biwa Playing M'Biwa Accepting h'e is a y'esman F'YP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JakPwhatculture Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Thanks for the help on this article guys, really appreciated it. Can be found here if you want to read it: 10 Worst Decisions Alan Pardew Has Made As Newcastle Boss Go easy on me, please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr Gloom 19822 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 drop the flowery prose and cliches for starters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gemmill 34441 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 I take full credit for numbers 5 and 2. You even used "acquiescing" on number 5. I'm a great bloke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr Gloom 19822 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Drop the buzzfeed style list blogs too. Fucking sick of them. Sorry, no offence but you did ask for feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meenzer 14042 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Apart from the style, the content and the structure, though, it's fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Howmanheyman 26814 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Ignored some of my points. No wonder the silly lad is getting panned. Someone else new wrote something on here and asked for feedback. I gave him some without taking the piss and he spat the dummy out big time. He took it poisenally and it was strictly business, not poisenal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoneColdStephenIreland 74 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 Choosing to be an utter, utter c*** Continuing to be an utter, utter c*** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fish 8989 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 Thanks for the help on this article guys, really appreciated it. Can be found here if you want to read it: 10 Worst Decisions Alan Pardew Has Made As Newcastle Boss Go easy on me, please! Got about three pages in, before I gave it up. Nothing wrong with the idea behind the piece and the writing is fine, I just hate those buzzfeed lists. It's obviously just driven by ad-click revenue, but I honestly can't be arsed to read a 1 page piece spread over 10 pages. Why not set up a wordpress blog? That way any ad space you sell goes in your pocket and, honestly, it'll give your thoughts more weight than if it's just a pictured list. You'd be able to find your own style of writing because you won't be constrained to bullet points and you'll find sites like this one more likely to promote it, as will "influential" people on twitter like @nufcthreatlevel and local journos; they wouldn't promote something like this as it stands. Hope you don't take any of that personally, and good luck with future stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JakPwhatculture Posted June 24, 2014 Share Posted June 24, 2014 Got about three pages in, before I gave it up. Nothing wrong with the idea behind the piece and the writing is fine, I just hate those buzzfeed lists. It's obviously just driven by ad-click revenue, but I honestly can't be arsed to read a 1 page piece spread over 10 pages. Why not set up a wordpress blog? That way any ad space you sell goes in your pocket and, honestly, it'll give your thoughts more weight than if it's just a pictured list. You'd be able to find your own style of writing because you won't be constrained to bullet points and you'll find sites like this one more likely to promote it, as will "influential" people on twitter like @nufcthreatlevel and local journos; they wouldn't promote something like this as it stands. Hope you don't take any of that personally, and good luck with future stuff. Thanks for the feedback dude (@@The Fish) and everyone else. Positive or negative it's appreciated and taken on board. Obviously i'm hamstrung in terms of style but i've put your issue with the buzz feed style to the senior editors and change could be afoot. As for my "flowery prose" I probably do go over the top but i'm an expressive chap but i'll endeavour to tone it down. Anyway, thanks again and nothing was taken as a personal insult even if I've used up my lifetime quota of tears in the past week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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